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I love you
I love you not
The petals of roses carry illusions
Just as your love carries these
The passing of red tears
On the skin of a rose
The rose on which they cannot be seen
Passing
Falling
Disappearing
I love you not
I love you
The tear is rolling
The rose is nothing
Not more than a splatter of red
Petals of droplets on the floor
Pearling
Spreading
Reaching
I love you
I love you not
I love you
I scatter the petals of your illusions
One being the last
Passing
Falling
Disappearing
I find my answer
I love you
I love you
No more petals to drop
My flower is empty
My life is naught
I love you not
The petals of roses carry illusions
Just as your love carries these
The passing of red tears
On the skin of a rose
The rose on which they cannot be seen
Passing
Falling
Disappearing
I love you not
I love you
The tear is rolling
The rose is nothing
Not more than a splatter of red
Petals of droplets on the floor
Pearling
Spreading
Reaching
I love you
I love you not
I love you
I scatter the petals of your illusions
One being the last
Passing
Falling
Disappearing
I find my answer
I love you
I love you
No more petals to drop
My flower is empty
My life is naught
I used to write a lot of poetry. I took an old poem and improved it.
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Ooooh, looks pretty awesome!